Post by account_disabled on Dec 3, 2023 16:20:33 GMT 5.5
The writer becomes an architect, urban planner, geographer, psychologist, tailor at times, because like a painter he must paint the pictures of his history. There isn't much that is creative here, yes, perhaps in the creation of the characters, but to give them a meaning, a part, a why, then he must be a technician, a director. The improvement of writing I just finished reading a good thriller. It's called Without Saying Goodbye by Linwood Barclay. Let's read a passage on page 169, which somehow escaped the Italian editor of Piemme, given that there are no repetitions in the original (the bold ones are mine).
Something in one of those clippings caught my attention. It had been cut from the pages of the Hartfort Courant. It was a piece about fly fishing on the Housatonic River. Whoever cut the page… I drop the classic veil of compassion and move on. This song is great in the creative phase. We gave the piece Phone Number Data the right suspense , neither too strong nor invisible. The reader wants to know more and we continue with the explanations. But it must be revised during rereading. Two of those sharp terms need to be cut away. Do you know what the plot of those lines is? Someone cuts the page by cutting out a clipping. This means. The monster of repetitions often appears on the writer's path. On every page.
I use a method, especially with adverbs. Ctrl+F and the Writer search box opens. I enter the word and click on “Search all”. And then I kill all the repetitions. Yes, all of them. Or almost, at least I try not to include any on the same page, a mistake that some self-published writers make. If they are adverbs above all: all those rhymes in -mente suggest a writer who lies... about his narrative abilities. Rhythm and musicality These are two elements of writing that help the reader, in my opinion. The rhythm is given by the arrangement of words and sentences, by the pauses of commas and periods. Musicality from the words themselves and their proximity.
Something in one of those clippings caught my attention. It had been cut from the pages of the Hartfort Courant. It was a piece about fly fishing on the Housatonic River. Whoever cut the page… I drop the classic veil of compassion and move on. This song is great in the creative phase. We gave the piece Phone Number Data the right suspense , neither too strong nor invisible. The reader wants to know more and we continue with the explanations. But it must be revised during rereading. Two of those sharp terms need to be cut away. Do you know what the plot of those lines is? Someone cuts the page by cutting out a clipping. This means. The monster of repetitions often appears on the writer's path. On every page.
I use a method, especially with adverbs. Ctrl+F and the Writer search box opens. I enter the word and click on “Search all”. And then I kill all the repetitions. Yes, all of them. Or almost, at least I try not to include any on the same page, a mistake that some self-published writers make. If they are adverbs above all: all those rhymes in -mente suggest a writer who lies... about his narrative abilities. Rhythm and musicality These are two elements of writing that help the reader, in my opinion. The rhythm is given by the arrangement of words and sentences, by the pauses of commas and periods. Musicality from the words themselves and their proximity.
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